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how sad ....
you capture the demise of a once beautiful love so clearly ...
loved this but it's very sad ....
excellent depiction of the demise of a relationship.
so sad
its so sad, i have been ther, and it ended very messy.
tragic
you captured that tragic, sorriful, state that some unions ,come to, and yet are unable to correct or end.
you brought
me to tears with this. Its such a familiar state.
it's the last stanza that got me....
you've managed to capture the desperation.
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No amount of lust can close the gulf that blossoms here.
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