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by Anonymous

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by RhymeFairy11/23/05

Wow !!

You do THIS so well !! I love it 4 ...
I love the dreamy imagery and
the stark wording. Your one'of a kind !!

More Please.

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by Anonymous11/23/05

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This poem was mentioned in the new poems review thread.


Tess

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by Angeline11/23/05

This is beautiful!

Such a well-executed combination of words and image. You just keep getting better. You have a gift. :)

~Ange

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by WickedEve11/25/05

absolutely...

love the poem. don't get the image, though.

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by variable Xy11/25/05

Stunning

I say it's likely that this work is one of my favorite illustrated poems, all others are yours as well.

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by duddle14612/31/06

Interesting.

The colors selected made the illustration a thing of beauty. The words were well selected to blend into the theme.

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by Amyfriend01/31/07

Very colorful..

bringing forth strong images that danced before my eyes.

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by LeBroz02/09/07

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Ah yes, that thing does seem to have a mind of its own.

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by tazz31704/17/12

WHAT IS TO BE GAINED

from a functioning bard. TK U MLJ LV NV

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