What a great little story that seemed to have me in laughter with the way you worked your words. Good to see such a story that can not possibly be criticized by "Anon in USA" or anyone else. Merry Xmas to you as well.
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Anonymous11/11/05
had me giggling
Very well done, that was funny, creative, and a nice use of the language. Had me giggling.
Art...
Your killing me man just killing me. LMAO
Ya know its not good to make a woman in a cast laugh tends to make them tip over and hurt another body part....*wicked grin*
Always, Lizzy
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Anonymous11/11/05
Inspired
The funniest thing i've seen all day, actually at least all week.
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11/11/05
Okay, now I know that
I've accused some authors of going off their meds but you must have taken them all. Was this a trip like from the sixties that made you come up with something so incredibly twisted such as perverting Dr. Seuss. Whatever it was, keep doing it. I loved this. We need more obscene humor and less war.
Sexy and funny; the prose needs a little work, but you did describe the idea well enuf to get the idea across.
Your rhyming, is the part that needs the work, but not much.
Liked it very much.
r
A pretty good idea, but I think it needed polish and work with meter and rhyme. I would read more by this author, but this one needed just a touch more work.
All the clits in Litville popped up in delight/At all the great smuttales the writers did write.
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Anonymous11/13/05
Oh dear-
I will never view Horton, the Grinch or Glop(?) ever quite the same way again. Wonderfully done, although I agree with Joseki Ko, you are very demented.
You have a sick, sick mind.
Someday I hope to meet you at a Litogether!
I suppose that "The Grinch That Fucked Christmas" will be the sequel?
Good luck with the contest. I hope you have as much fun next month as Molly and Billy did.
Jenny
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Anonymous11/14/05
deranged
amusing enough, though as has been pointed out, it falls far short of the original in terms of rhyme and meter. went back and re-read the "The Cat in the Hat" and re-read the story... hmm, was fun reading, all the same.
That was great :) Thanks for the laugh and the little shiver of excitement. Christmas is definitely in the air and it's a time to let loose and get wild...
That was one adventurous pussy. "Sliding down the banister in one slip-sliding zoom." The slivers must have been a bitch. Holiday fun from Art...how great is that? Good luck!
Cookie :)
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Anonymous11/14/05
Too Young?
I know the ages of the two youngsters isn't ever mentioned, but the play on words..."Cat In The Hat" versus "Pussy In The Christmas Hat...implies the children are very young. The movie from which this title is taken was directed at the preteen set. Please note older kids wouldn't be so dismayed by no presents. So how does this story get by the editors when the rules here are that the minimum age is 18 for participation in the story's theme?
English
Ho ho ho!
What a great little story that seemed to have me in laughter with the way you worked your words. Good to see such a story that can not possibly be criticized by "Anon in USA" or anyone else. Merry Xmas to you as well.
had me giggling
Very well done, that was funny, creative, and a nice use of the language. Had me giggling.
A Skewered Tale
Told by a twisted mind. Thank You. Ronnie W.
Meow
Sick puppy. Happy Holidays -- and good luck! ~Imp
The next "Grinch That Stole Christmas?"
Deserves classic status of some sort! A hoot!
You Sicko~
I loved it. Channeling Seuss must have been a treat!
*smiles*
Bravo!
that's fucked up!
Loved it, laughed my ass off.
*dies laughing*
Art...
Your killing me man just killing me. LMAO
Ya know its not good to make a woman in a cast laugh tends to make them tip over and hurt another body part....*wicked grin*
Always, Lizzy
Inspired
The funniest thing i've seen all day, actually at least all week.
Okay, now I know that
I've accused some authors of going off their meds but you must have taken them all. Was this a trip like from the sixties that made you come up with something so incredibly twisted such as perverting Dr. Seuss. Whatever it was, keep doing it. I loved this. We need more obscene humor and less war.
Sexy and Funny
Sexy and funny; the prose needs a little work, but you did describe the idea well enuf to get the idea across.
Your rhyming, is the part that needs the work, but not much.
Liked it very much.
r
nice job
Very nice job... gave me a chuckle or two.
Hilarious
A new Christmas classic.
not impressed
Tacky
Merry
Christmas indeed. LOL Very funny.
Good luck.
Black Tulip
Fan-fuzzleistic!
Throughout all of Lit,
What a wonderful spot
To find a fun story
That is also quite hot! :)
Good luck, it was great!
You are
very demented, loved it keep up the good work
I Do So Like Great Porn/No Spam.
A pretty good idea, but I think it needed polish and work with meter and rhyme. I would read more by this author, but this one needed just a touch more work.
All the clits in Litville popped up in delight/At all the great smuttales the writers did write.
Oh dear-
I will never view Horton, the Grinch or Glop(?) ever quite the same way again. Wonderfully done, although I agree with Joseki Ko, you are very demented.
JimDinMN
Merry Fucking Christmas
You have a sick, sick mind.
Someday I hope to meet you at a Litogether!
I suppose that "The Grinch That Fucked Christmas" will be the sequel?
Good luck with the contest. I hope you have as much fun next month as Molly and Billy did.
Jenny
deranged
amusing enough, though as has been pointed out, it falls far short of the original in terms of rhyme and meter. went back and re-read the "The Cat in the Hat" and re-read the story... hmm, was fun reading, all the same.
:)
That was great :) Thanks for the laugh and the little shiver of excitement. Christmas is definitely in the air and it's a time to let loose and get wild...
Hilarious Happy Holidays,
Ali :D
Weird.
Weird, weird, weird.
Boy oh boy...
That was one adventurous pussy. "Sliding down the banister in one slip-sliding zoom." The slivers must have been a bitch. Holiday fun from Art...how great is that? Good luck!
Cookie :)
Too Young?
I know the ages of the two youngsters isn't ever mentioned, but the play on words..."Cat In The Hat" versus "Pussy In The Christmas Hat...implies the children are very young. The movie from which this title is taken was directed at the preteen set. Please note older kids wouldn't be so dismayed by no presents. So how does this story get by the editors when the rules here are that the minimum age is 18 for participation in the story's theme?
First ~ thank you
Second~ The ages were mentioned and implied
I believe this story is read better when read slowly to grasp the ryhme. It only clashes if I read it fast.
Thanks to all who read this tale.. comment/vote/feedback
and I wish all a "Merry Christmas"
Art~
entertaining
A new twist to an old tale, humorous and clever, Arto.
ET, you have a very strange imagination...
I've said it before,
twice just last night.
ET's imagination,
is way outta sight.
Rumple Foreskin :cool:
A Fun Read
but, as somebody else said, the rhyme and meter could be improved. As for the ages, you mentioned Billy as being 18 and his sister is in college.
Love it!!!!!
You are one amazing teller of tales, erotic or other...
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