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Something Old, Something New Ch. 06

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous04/25/08

Great

I love this story. Yes, it is short but it was still really good.

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by Bahama02/21/13

Awesome

Better than I thought

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by Anonymous10/05/13

No sense of who they are

I don't very any sense if who the older woman is, or of romantic build up. What do they see in each other (besides the younger womans beauty). I don't fuel any emotional connection to anyone in the story. Very superficial.

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