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Just What He Wanted

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by Anonymous

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by saw_man111/11/05

A great gift

I know I should have behaved better this year. That was a nice story.

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by Anonymous11/11/05

What she needed

"Sounds great but I'll need a shower first" said Helen before kissing James again and departing for the bathroom."


After that load he just put in her, she will need a "summer's Eve" to wash that cum out so she doesn't leak all over the chair at the restuatant....

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by sack11/11/05

neat little story....

and good luck to you!

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by impressive11/11/05

Nice job!

Good luck in the contest! ~Imp

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by gizzmo30111/11/05

Nice

Gee a true LOVINGwife story liked it

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by Extreme Bohunk11/11/05

Romantic & sweet

Very nice story. A nice depature from the usual fare in the 'Loving wives' category.

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by 11/11/05

Sweet...

Lovely addition to the contest.

Always, E

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by 11/11/05

Echoing Imp

Nice job. Good luck in the contest!
v~

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by DoctorWyldcard11/11/05

Ah....

Don't know if this is a Loving Wife story or a Romance myself!

Just the thing to start out your day on the right note IMO.

Thanks!

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by Anonymous11/11/05

Houdini?

For me the story lacked credibility as I spent the whole story wondering how she got wrapped up in the box. ( . . all wrapped up with a bow on top.)

It can only have been her secret lover who screwed her before she got in the box, and watched them having sex after she got out.

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by Aliyahlovinsex11/11/05

Sweet story

the only advice I would offer is a few more commas were needed in places. Otherwise it was a sweet little holiday tale :)

Good luck

Ali

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by dreampilot7911/11/05

good job

Nice story.. good luck

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by Ronnie Wachuka11/11/05

A beautiful tale

Well written and lovingly told. Thank You. Ronnie W.

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by My Erotic Tale11/12/05

x-mas present

the best gift is the gift of love...and sex too nice tale...

Merry Christmas and Good Luck! (~_~)

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by Selena_Kitt11/12/05

Awww....

Sweet! Who says being married is boring? :) Good luck to you!

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by cheesy80s11/12/05

adjectives

Yea, but was his wife beautiful?

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by Anonymous11/13/05

Great

I have enjoyed all your stories.
Are there more to cum.
Please let me know.
Thanks
Al

chief40al@yahoo.com

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by 11/20/05

Nicely done

I never thought of having myself boxed, wrapped and bowtied but hey, sounds like an idea. Good luck in the contest.

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by MnRider12/08/05

Nice present,

some people are just so hard to buy for!!

Fun story.

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by Anonymous08/14/06

Nice story

Great story!

(Hey, she could have gotten a box with a top and just put the lid on the box, with the the bow on top...)

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by Anonymous10/04/07

Very nice story, but whats with the flavored condum. Most women like the flavor of a good bare stiff cock. I guess thats called a sanitry blow job. My wife like the feel and taste of a good cock, although she spits the cum in a kleenex.

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