(Hey, she could have gotten a box with a top and just put the lid on the box, with the the bow on top...)
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Anonymous10/04/07
Very nice story, but whats with the flavored condum. Most women like the flavor of a good bare stiff cock. I guess thats called a sanitry blow job. My wife like the feel and taste of a good cock, although she spits the cum in a kleenex.
A great gift
I know I should have behaved better this year. That was a nice story.
What she needed
"Sounds great but I'll need a shower first" said Helen before kissing James again and departing for the bathroom."
After that load he just put in her, she will need a "summer's Eve" to wash that cum out so she doesn't leak all over the chair at the restuatant....
neat little story....
and good luck to you!
Nice job!
Good luck in the contest! ~Imp
Nice
Gee a true LOVINGwife story liked it
Romantic & sweet
Very nice story. A nice depature from the usual fare in the 'Loving wives' category.
Sweet...
Lovely addition to the contest.
Always, E
Echoing Imp
Nice job. Good luck in the contest!
v~
Ah....
Don't know if this is a Loving Wife story or a Romance myself!
Just the thing to start out your day on the right note IMO.
Thanks!
Houdini?
For me the story lacked credibility as I spent the whole story wondering how she got wrapped up in the box. ( . . all wrapped up with a bow on top.)
It can only have been her secret lover who screwed her before she got in the box, and watched them having sex after she got out.
Sweet story
the only advice I would offer is a few more commas were needed in places. Otherwise it was a sweet little holiday tale :)
Good luck
Ali
good job
Nice story.. good luck
A beautiful tale
Well written and lovingly told. Thank You. Ronnie W.
x-mas present
the best gift is the gift of love...and sex too nice tale...
Merry Christmas and Good Luck! (~_~)
Awww....
Sweet! Who says being married is boring? :) Good luck to you!
adjectives
Yea, but was his wife beautiful?
Great
I have enjoyed all your stories.
Are there more to cum.
Please let me know.
Thanks
Al
chief40al@yahoo.com
Nicely done
I never thought of having myself boxed, wrapped and bowtied but hey, sounds like an idea. Good luck in the contest.
Nice present,
some people are just so hard to buy for!!
Fun story.
Nice story
Great story!
(Hey, she could have gotten a box with a top and just put the lid on the box, with the the bow on top...)
Very nice story, but whats with the flavored condum. Most women like the flavor of a good bare stiff cock. I guess thats called a sanitry blow job. My wife like the feel and taste of a good cock, although she spits the cum in a kleenex.
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