All Comments on 'Babysittin''

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Too brief

Don't 'pad' it - but do add meat to the bones!

Lukas

57chevyman57chevymanover 18 years ago
More

Good story, but you could have more detail add. What was she feeling as she was being fucked. What was his feeling. More detail like the cum dripping out of her pussy as she walks pass the wife. A little detail can go a long ways.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
theif

seen in a porno

don87654don87654about 18 years ago
Great reading!

Very erotic. Now that she knows how to babysit his kids, and she has fucked their daddy with his "sperm shooting into her depths" it is time for her to get bred by him and to babysit their baby as well, with him continuing to fuck her and enlarging his offspring number with more siblings to this first baby? This story needs continued.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
cliche?

Generic plot, descriptions and events. I fantasized better than this before you were even a glint in yer pappy's eye. ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
genius

Genius, pure erotic genius!

don87654don87654about 14 years ago
Make a baby

Continue this erotic story with Bob breeding Cheri so she can babysit her own baby.

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