She should have brought up the adultery issue up long ago, when there was time to deal with it rationally and either repair the problem or dissolve the marriage when there was time for the two spouses to find new long term partners. 3 stars. Not good to leave the ending open. That's an abdication of the author's responsibility. Dan
and your 100% correct about the double standard, but not the way the story was presented. my brother in law stopping over to fuck my wife for 6 weeks, is a lot different than being with an anonymous person just once. the story showed he missed and loved his wife, and the wife loved him. she took the story too far, and luckily got to her sisters before hubby did. if any one of the women he had slept with husbands had caught him he would or could have been shot. hopefully he has gotten his head out of his ass now. I believe he has, and as proof, the gun in his pocket.
reading these stories I try to reverse roles to understand the right thing in them, or put them in 1st person(as if were happening to me). good story, I was entertained by the set up.
and thoughtful; does show a double standard, and the way she played it was subtle -- although highly dangerous as it turned out. Oddly when I started reading it I thought it was going to be the other way round. We read of so many stories where the wife sleeps around but expects her cuckold hubby to be faithful! Oh well I guess this is the more traditional setup.
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Anonymous12/19/15
A Five to Three Because
I always enjoy your stories and always go with a five BUT...
Not this time. JPB is terrible at this type of ending. I (we) want you to finish.
Anyway...Divorce, and...
Your story line, use and presentation of words indicated only one definite direction, she was firm and unemotional in the final oaragraphs, the logic and unfolding of her plot had one purpose only, forgive and stay married, falter and...'DIVORCE'!!!
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Anonymous12/21/15
Could Harry just shoot and kill all three of them?.
That would be my solution. Figure out some good way to get rid of all three of them. Then he doesn't lose anything. In fact, maybe Barb left Miriam everything in her will, so Harry even profited from the deal. Now THAT would be some solution.
How could "Steve" be both her brother-in-law and his brother-in-law? Seems a bit confusing. The story was interesting, but proof-reading would have addressed the sloppiness in the story. I appreciate your writing, though. 3*
Need an ending,one way or the other! Really enjoy your stories but this ending(?) just doesn't cut the mustard! ~ If she was going to dump him,it should have been long ago! If she really wanted to keep him,she should have confronted him long ago! ~ If he really loved her he would have stopped long ago. ~ It seems as though they're just hanging on to a love long ago cooled. On the other hand,maybe love is stronger than sex. Morale : It just Ain't Easy!
I hate it as a man, but he is totally wrong. She even gave him a chance. Get the gun first, then dump him.
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Anonymous04/19/16
Double standard
Double Standard?
Of course there is a double standard. Before a guy gets sex he has to sweet talk the woman into going out on a date with him. Then comes the date. He has to be debonair, sophisticated, witty, impeccably dressed, smooth tongue, charming, extravagant and giving, sensitive, a good listener and that is just the tip of the character he must display. Then, if given the chance, he must be physically attuned to her while still being able to 'perform' under all that pressure. Granted, this is just one scenario, but all other variations are just as elaborate and demanding.
What does a woman have to do for sex? Just show up! Yes, the double standard is surely deserved.
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Anonymous05/12/16
That is one chickenshit way to end a story.
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Anonymous08/20/16
That ending is the typical bullshit that authors on LW pull. There are no double standards. Cheats are cheats. The wife dumps his sorry ass and takes him for all he's worth in the divorce. Finis.
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Anonymous09/10/16
well
Had he said "Shit! Of course I forgive you, I was going after that son of a bitch for trying to blackmail you...
Her dilemma is having publicly come up with a litmus test, he clearly flunked, ther is pressure on her to dtmf.
Fucking low-life cheating jerkoff asshole prick husband. Then again all cheaters are low-life's. He doesn't deserve to have a faithful, loving wife. I don't remember the outcome but I will re-read the sequel, hoping the asshole cheating slag gets dumped.
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Anonymous10/14/16
no functioning grey matter...
...between her ears if she stays with him.
I am 63 year old male and find his actions and attitude reprehensible.
Sex, can be just a physical act if both parties are single but marriage changes that.
I am not some fundamentalist chauvinist. I grew up in the free love 60s and 70s. I have been told I am one of that rare breed called nice guys. That doesn't mean I have lacked for female companionship. For an average guy like myself, being no celebrity, the fact that I have had sex with 50 females should indicate I am not a prude. I took my marriage vows seriously, my wife had a different view. I remained married to her for the sake of my boys. We were quite pleasant to each other and my sons grew up in a loving home. For my part, my physical transformation became complete during my college years. Gone was the skinny bookworm, replaced by muscular, ripped intelligent, romantic and according to a number of females drop dead gorgeous guy. Did retain the little boy charm and looked twenty years younger than my age when i turned fifty. During first 10 years of marriage and the four years we had dated, I was hit on hundreds of times. I always turned them down. I simply told them i loved my wife. When females would tell me they did not care and it was just sex I would shake my head and walk away.
When i found out about wife breaking vows, we talked, agreed to stay together until boys graduated high school. Then i just stopped saying NO when i was propositioned. By the time boys left home we had put mobile home on our two acres. She moved into it with her mother. Neither of us had plans to remarry so we just became neighbors- no physical benefits but remained friendly and helped each other out when occasions arose. I have four bedrooms in my house. A very attractive 46 year old redhead has one. We spend quite a bit of time alternating visits to each others rooms. Rent is free but conditional. As long as she dates no one else she can stay. She has been here 7 years. One bedroom is guest room for when her daughter or one of my family visits. Last bedroom has been rented out during school year to different college girls for last 5 years. A couple of them have wanted to get the older man's perspective so to speak and those repeated requests are always fulfilled. No quid pro quo on rent. No other males allowed in my house.
No threeways with my redhead, but on over a dozen occasions, when i would return to my room in the very early morning, the woman who had been listening to the sounds coming out of the other ''renter's'' room would be waiting for me in my bed.
Having maintened my physical fitness my blood continues to flow just fine. No blue pills needed when you keep the 'apparatus' active.
My redhead and i enjoy the romance and LW stories on this site and are of like mind about cheating. We have had some lively conversations about the raac ones. At times disagreeing and presenting the case for the strayer celt's Judith we took a lot of time going over. Both of us vascillating back and forth before finally agreeing with author
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Anonymous11/17/16
HE IS A LOW LIFE CHEATING BASTARD
SHE NEEDS TO DUMP HIS SORRY ASS AS QUICK AS POSSIBLE....TALK ABOUT DOUBLE STANDARDS...
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Anonymous01/22/17
Keep In Mind I Am The Husband
I cheated once, and only once, on my first wife. The other woman told my wife, and I was asked to leave. I love my first wife to this day. I remarried. And I went through what I caused my first wife to endure. Only my second wife was like a porn star, having had sex with a substantial number of partners. Then I met another lady and thought we were on our way to the altar when I walked in on her with three men in bed. Finally, I met someone else. We had been married 22 years and had a son when she got the misconception that I was cheating with a number of women. There was no truth to her beliefs. But because she thought I was cheating she had an ongoing affair with her first husband. My affairs were imagined. Hers was real. We are separated but not divorced. She continues to see her first husband. What does this have to do with the story? He cheated numerous times. The wife did not! He cannot see the double standard. I have been both the victim and the bastard. She should burn him to the ground. No mercy! She gave him 30 years of fidelity. Take the shirt right off of his body. Ruin him as only a divorced wife can!
English
divorce the nigga
Wife should have revealed her feelings long ago.
She should have brought up the adultery issue up long ago, when there was time to deal with it rationally and either repair the problem or dissolve the marriage when there was time for the two spouses to find new long term partners. 3 stars. Not good to leave the ending open. That's an abdication of the author's responsibility. Dan
He Never Said..
He never said he wouldn't forgive her, just that he was torn up and wanted to confront Steve.
Not Exactly Comparable Situations
He was having "one night stand" flings, if her story was true she was having an AFFAIR with a family member!
Regarding "double standards", what he was asking for is what most of the cheating wives always ask for, and that cheating HUSBANDS almost never get!
loved it
and your 100% correct about the double standard, but not the way the story was presented. my brother in law stopping over to fuck my wife for 6 weeks, is a lot different than being with an anonymous person just once. the story showed he missed and loved his wife, and the wife loved him. she took the story too far, and luckily got to her sisters before hubby did. if any one of the women he had slept with husbands had caught him he would or could have been shot. hopefully he has gotten his head out of his ass now. I believe he has, and as proof, the gun in his pocket.
reading these stories I try to reverse roles to understand the right thing in them, or put them in 1st person(as if were happening to me). good story, I was entertained by the set up.
Enjoyed it
some interesting thoughts. Thanks for the offering.
if i were her
i would have divorced him after the first time i found out
Divorce the jerk, no choice
Good story, thanks
Good story! gave you a 5
for effort and story line
Good
and thoughtful; does show a double standard, and the way she played it was subtle -- although highly dangerous as it turned out. Oddly when I started reading it I thought it was going to be the other way round. We read of so many stories where the wife sleeps around but expects her cuckold hubby to be faithful! Oh well I guess this is the more traditional setup.
A Five to Three Because
I always enjoy your stories and always go with a five BUT...
Not this time. JPB is terrible at this type of ending. I (we) want you to finish.
Anyway...Divorce, and...
Your story line, use and presentation of words indicated only one definite direction, she was firm and unemotional in the final oaragraphs, the logic and unfolding of her plot had one purpose only, forgive and stay married, falter and...'DIVORCE'!!!
Could Harry just shoot and kill all three of them?.
That would be my solution. Figure out some good way to get rid of all three of them. Then he doesn't lose anything. In fact, maybe Barb left Miriam everything in her will, so Harry even profited from the deal. Now THAT would be some solution.
Weird . . .
How could "Steve" be both her brother-in-law and his brother-in-law? Seems a bit confusing. The story was interesting, but proof-reading would have addressed the sloppiness in the story. I appreciate your writing, though. 3*
@ejsathome Re: Weird
He can be both because he is!
The man who marries your sister is your brother-in-law AND your wife's b-i-l. and the man who marries your WIFE'S sister is her b-i-l ND yours!
WTF?!
Need an ending,one way or the other! Really enjoy your stories but this ending(?) just doesn't cut the mustard! ~ If she was going to dump him,it should have been long ago! If she really wanted to keep him,she should have confronted him long ago! ~ If he really loved her he would have stopped long ago. ~ It seems as though they're just hanging on to a love long ago cooled. On the other hand,maybe love is stronger than sex. Morale : It just Ain't Easy!
Wife Wins
I hate it as a man, but he is totally wrong. She even gave him a chance. Get the gun first, then dump him.
Double standard
Double Standard?
Of course there is a double standard. Before a guy gets sex he has to sweet talk the woman into going out on a date with him. Then comes the date. He has to be debonair, sophisticated, witty, impeccably dressed, smooth tongue, charming, extravagant and giving, sensitive, a good listener and that is just the tip of the character he must display. Then, if given the chance, he must be physically attuned to her while still being able to 'perform' under all that pressure. Granted, this is just one scenario, but all other variations are just as elaborate and demanding.
What does a woman have to do for sex? Just show up! Yes, the double standard is surely deserved.
That is one chickenshit way to end a story.
That ending is the typical bullshit that authors on LW pull. There are no double standards. Cheats are cheats. The wife dumps his sorry ass and takes him for all he's worth in the divorce. Finis.
well
Had he said "Shit! Of course I forgive you, I was going after that son of a bitch for trying to blackmail you...
Her dilemma is having publicly come up with a litmus test, he clearly flunked, ther is pressure on her to dtmf.
But they are your characters, you decide
Again
Fucking low-life cheating jerkoff asshole prick husband. Then again all cheaters are low-life's. He doesn't deserve to have a faithful, loving wife. I don't remember the outcome but I will re-read the sequel, hoping the asshole cheating slag gets dumped.
no functioning grey matter...
...between her ears if she stays with him.
I am 63 year old male and find his actions and attitude reprehensible.
Sex, can be just a physical act if both parties are single but marriage changes that.
I am not some fundamentalist chauvinist. I grew up in the free love 60s and 70s. I have been told I am one of that rare breed called nice guys. That doesn't mean I have lacked for female companionship. For an average guy like myself, being no celebrity, the fact that I have had sex with 50 females should indicate I am not a prude. I took my marriage vows seriously, my wife had a different view. I remained married to her for the sake of my boys. We were quite pleasant to each other and my sons grew up in a loving home. For my part, my physical transformation became complete during my college years. Gone was the skinny bookworm, replaced by muscular, ripped intelligent, romantic and according to a number of females drop dead gorgeous guy. Did retain the little boy charm and looked twenty years younger than my age when i turned fifty. During first 10 years of marriage and the four years we had dated, I was hit on hundreds of times. I always turned them down. I simply told them i loved my wife. When females would tell me they did not care and it was just sex I would shake my head and walk away.
When i found out about wife breaking vows, we talked, agreed to stay together until boys graduated high school. Then i just stopped saying NO when i was propositioned. By the time boys left home we had put mobile home on our two acres. She moved into it with her mother. Neither of us had plans to remarry so we just became neighbors- no physical benefits but remained friendly and helped each other out when occasions arose. I have four bedrooms in my house. A very attractive 46 year old redhead has one. We spend quite a bit of time alternating visits to each others rooms. Rent is free but conditional. As long as she dates no one else she can stay. She has been here 7 years. One bedroom is guest room for when her daughter or one of my family visits. Last bedroom has been rented out during school year to different college girls for last 5 years. A couple of them have wanted to get the older man's perspective so to speak and those repeated requests are always fulfilled. No quid pro quo on rent. No other males allowed in my house.
No threeways with my redhead, but on over a dozen occasions, when i would return to my room in the very early morning, the woman who had been listening to the sounds coming out of the other ''renter's'' room would be waiting for me in my bed.
Having maintened my physical fitness my blood continues to flow just fine. No blue pills needed when you keep the 'apparatus' active.
My redhead and i enjoy the romance and LW stories on this site and are of like mind about cheating. We have had some lively conversations about the raac ones. At times disagreeing and presenting the case for the strayer celt's Judith we took a lot of time going over. Both of us vascillating back and forth before finally agreeing with author
HE IS A LOW LIFE CHEATING BASTARD
SHE NEEDS TO DUMP HIS SORRY ASS AS QUICK AS POSSIBLE....TALK ABOUT DOUBLE STANDARDS...
Keep In Mind I Am The Husband
I cheated once, and only once, on my first wife. The other woman told my wife, and I was asked to leave. I love my first wife to this day. I remarried. And I went through what I caused my first wife to endure. Only my second wife was like a porn star, having had sex with a substantial number of partners. Then I met another lady and thought we were on our way to the altar when I walked in on her with three men in bed. Finally, I met someone else. We had been married 22 years and had a son when she got the misconception that I was cheating with a number of women. There was no truth to her beliefs. But because she thought I was cheating she had an ongoing affair with her first husband. My affairs were imagined. Hers was real. We are separated but not divorced. She continues to see her first husband. What does this have to do with the story? He cheated numerous times. The wife did not! He cannot see the double standard. I have been both the victim and the bastard. She should burn him to the ground. No mercy! She gave him 30 years of fidelity. Take the shirt right off of his body. Ruin him as only a divorced wife can!
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