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by Anonymous

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by twelveoone11/13/05

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nothing really strong here,
but what a way it dances.

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by sack11/13/05

yes, this dances...

and the rhythm is strong...Thanks for sharing!

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by Anonymous11/13/05

Excellent

I find it very strong. The line breaking is used very well, and the metaphor is maintained throughout. An excellent poem, CW!

Fly

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by lobomao11/13/05

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oh how fun
an audience of one
curiousity peaked
and passion burn
wherever was it
she found that to learn?

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by LeBroz11/13/05

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Indeed there is
Nothing as sweet as
A professional woman...

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by dcpoet4411/17/05

under the surface....

this packs a punch, but straight up it sells itself with Girls, Girls, Girls. nicely done......don

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