All Comments on 'Hunters Moon'

Everything here is off

the beaten paths

I like it

..raw, unsentimental and uncompromising.

Poems that cause a visceral reaction are good. This poem's unwillingness to flinch makes the reader flinch.

bb

powerful poetry.

jim : )

like a cold wind stripping the last leaves off the trees. Thanks for sharing this!

good!

Strong images and clean. Well done, Sabina!

Fly

Hunter's Moon

Sabina, I bow humble~ (~_~) this is shear paramount poetry! zen of life and "Archery" <great poem> season of... a Hunter's Moon.

Just chiming in with another "well done!"

:)

Curiouswife

An excellent write;

Just goes to show,

Beware the metaphorical hunter,

Her heart's cold as the snow...

strong poetry, amazing imagery

Chris

The overall image is very strong, I had a very real sense of 'being there'

Wonderful write Sabina.. images rise forth and I felt the release of the bow string.. as the arrow made the all to familiar thud!

Mentioned in the Sunday Reviews

du lac~

Very moving and unsettling, loved it.

and a bit chilling but worth every word of it.....nicely done sabina.......don

Remind me not to piss you off ;-)

Uncompromising. Powerful. My words are redundant Damn 5