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Everything here is off
the beaten paths
I like it
Original..
..raw, unsentimental and uncompromising.
Poems that cause a visceral reaction are good. This poem's unwillingness to flinch makes the reader flinch.
bb
Savage
powerful poetry.
jim : )
gripping.....
like a cold wind stripping the last leaves off the trees. Thanks for sharing this!
Frighteningly
good!
Strong images and clean. Well done, Sabina!
Fly
howel-ing
Hunter's Moon
Sabina, I bow humble~ (~_~) this is shear paramount poetry! zen of life and "Archery" season of... a Hunter's Moon.
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Just chiming in with another "well done!"
:)
Curiouswife
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An excellent write;
Just goes to show,
Beware the metaphorical hunter,
Her heart's cold as the snow...
wonderful
strong poetry, amazing imagery
Chris
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The overall image is very strong, I had a very real sense of 'being there'
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Wonderful write Sabina.. images rise forth and I felt the release of the bow string.. as the arrow made the all to familiar thud!
Mentioned in the Sunday Reviews
du lac~
Chilling
Very moving and unsettling, loved it.
swift execution in this one...
and a bit chilling but worth every word of it.....nicely done sabina.......don
damn
Remind me not to piss you off ;-)
Uncompromising. Powerful. My words are redundant Damn 5
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