All Comments on 'Great Study Date'

by russeltrust

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Spoiled...

... by bad language - too much 'Holy Jesus!'

Stan

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Ruhed

The beginning was too fast. I mean, it just started with Hey, I'm here to fuck. I wanted a bit more exposition.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
spoiled by bad words?

since when is Jesus a bad word.... meanwhile the story is laced with fuck... TOO FUNNY !!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
poor beginning

Poor begining. it was almost commical starting with 'hey I want to fuck you'. However apart from thaat it was a fairly good. if only atractive yet dorky girls were like that. Sigh..........

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Realistic -but lead-in could be better

[Tried leaving comment from my BBerry - but didn't seem to work]

My monogamous wife of decades deflowered 2 virgins when in college. It really turned me on when she related those adventures. Your story, being somewhat realistic, did the same. Like your heroine, my wife was both a nerd (got top writing job right out of college) and sexy.

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