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Unfinished?
Nice tale, Please continue.
Very Good
Oh the games people play!
Boyd
Snicker
Over confidence.
Always the downfall of the magical.
Nice little piece of work.
Thanks Everyone
I think of it as being a finished story, but who knows what the future will bring.
Thanks for the wonderful comments. I appreciate them.~ Michelle
A delightful story
Thank You for allowing us to share it with you. Ronnie W.
Nicely worked
You could still continue their story - if you wanted...
Lukas
Beautiful
I just want to say that this is probably one of my favourite stories on Literotica. The only thing that could make it better is a longer tale to the same standards. What's here implies a rich back-story and potential for so much more interplay between the two lovers that I would love to see expanded on.
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