All Comments on 'Pretty Damned Good'

Good plot, but the dialouge is too rushed. You should spend more time describing things, and pace the dialouge out more so that it flows better, and doesn't sound like a hyper active teenage girl talking on her cell phone to her best friend. a solid effort, though...

I do agree with SLOW DOWN.

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<I>-- srgeek --</I>

Romantic warrior and two lovelies. Fantasy island?