All Comments on 'urgent'

by laelia

Sort by:
  • 4 Comments
jthserrajthserraover 18 years ago
Wow...

you have shown erotic urgency with powerful imagery. Best poem of the day...

jim : )

sacksackover 18 years ago
Great stuff.....

just about unimprovable!

lobomaolobomaoover 18 years ago
•) I got my ticket...

this slow long train

this long deligherous ride

on and on and on this night

I trace the wandering tracks

around around the outside

it's late on the red eye

as we roll through night's deep

you should rest yourself darling

let this ride rock you to sleep

jthserrajthserraover 18 years ago
I forgot to mention it...

this poem was mentioned in the Sunday new poetry reviews...

jim : )

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous