All Comments on 'Just Friends Ch. 02'

Sophie should just give it up and be true to herself.... and Malcolm...be simple and true....

Although this was well written, it does not really fit into the catagory of erotic literature in my mind. I also find the way it was split into two parts odd and disjointed. Beyond that, I had a hard time following past and present, which only lessened my enjoyment. Oddly though, I think this story had undeveloped potential to actually be something interesting but it just never happened for me. Despite my criticisms, I must say that I think the writer has talent beyond what was portrayed in this story so I will have to check out some more of their writing.