while ill admit it was an interesting story, it also kinda sucked. i mean, just because the husband supposedly treats her bad does not mean its cool for her to sleep with someone else. she should have divorced him then sleep with the man of her dreams. oh yea, there is one way in hell a judge would allow her to take the kids away from him, to another country.
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Anonymous04/21/09
Err hm!
Any husband who leaves his wife alone in a foreign country while off to "fish" for five nights doesn`t deserve a faithful wife , I hope they will be very happy together once they get rid of fishing arseh*le!
English
First Story?
Hey Egmont,
Is this the first story you ever published? It sucked, and you've done much better. Back to basics for You dude.
REPLY - Oh not you again!
Don't ever try for employment as a critic, Rudy. That requires a brain.
good story and keep them coming
you see why we put rudy in the wildness now.
great story
Loved the story. Great ending. Keep it up.
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while ill admit it was an interesting story, it also kinda sucked. i mean, just because the husband supposedly treats her bad does not mean its cool for her to sleep with someone else. she should have divorced him then sleep with the man of her dreams. oh yea, there is one way in hell a judge would allow her to take the kids away from him, to another country.
Err hm!
Any husband who leaves his wife alone in a foreign country while off to "fish" for five nights doesn`t deserve a faithful wife , I hope they will be very happy together once they get rid of fishing arseh*le!
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