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For Your Viewing Pleasure

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by Anonymous

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by sack11/16/05

very effective.....

the ending kind of surprised me....cool little poem

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by Tzara11/16/05

Um, hmm. "Pleasure."

I especially liked these lines:

a trinket of a girl
on a shelf, bent
over, displayed
for your viewing pleasure

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by dcpoet4411/17/05

a bit dirty....

but so wonderfully stated for innocent eyes....*LOL*. i've gotta agree with, bent over, on a shelf, displayed for your viewing pleasure. a package indeed worth checking out. nicely done......don

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by Naturemithya02/27/09

Wow

Of course you would be 'J' ready to fight if I were to take you as a trinket for I have many such trinkets under my sleeves to my joy.

Yes the temperature did rise but suddenly cooled down to fifty.
Congrats.

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