the poem that is...you've unleashed definite ways of the flesh. the spot that really sells this one is - neruda whore. it flows real nice too.......nicely done.....don
made my skin crawl back for more nice write (~_~)
in the way you use words as well as the overall rhythm of the poem. A role model for other poems of this genre. Bravo!
I hope this was deliberate:
if not maybe it should be,
agree with below.
erotic poem I have read in many, many moons.
caress my imagination, like your tongue on your lover's flesh.
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