Am enjoying your story, hope you're going to continue it!
I'd like to know what happens next.
Please do continue!
i can't wait for the rest! pleeasee continue :D
That's really hot. Please add more soon!!
I was completely taken by these 2 chapters. Where is the rest??? I must know what happens next. Wonderful writing and a great sense of the psychology of both dom and sub.
both you and your narrator, that is. I do hope you'll decide to continue as promised someday.
I hope you decide to continue this story, it is one of my favorites thus far!
I don't know if you'll read this, as the story was posted 5 yrs ago. I'm begging! Please, please write more! This is an excellent story. Not just the sex (that's really hottt thgh. But the affection between the couple. Loves that she continues to smile at him and show her personality without being a brat. And how he continues to check on her well-being. Anyway hope u see this!
i agree! more please. omg. this is awesome. i love how you're portraying the affection between them, making it so real and caring. YAY for SSC!!!!
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