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sacksackover 18 years ago
these short stories are a LOT harder....

to write than they look! Thanks for taking the time!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Great

Thanks for sharing your thoughts during the holiday season.

Boyd

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Cute...

These were quite cute (intended in a good sense). I particularly enjoyed 'Stocking Fillers'. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Oops!

The first comment didn't reflect my vote at all. ;)

Extreme BohunkExtreme Bohunkover 18 years ago
Love those 50's!

50 words & Ogg captures the feelings of Christmas like nobody else. Great words, as always.

dreampilot79dreampilot79over 18 years ago
What can ya say?.. classic og

Good as always sir... my hero.. the great og at his best

Selena_KittSelena_Kittover 18 years ago
Warm Fuzzies

It gave me the warm fuzzies... so much in the world to be grateful for. Thanks for the reminder, Og.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Another one?

Can we expect another one like that for Valentine's day?

They are so good, so inspiring, so well written. You should make a point of doing one for every Holiday that exists. :)

LadyCibelleLadyCibelleover 18 years ago
Another one?

Don't know why...my first one appeared as Anonymous :(

Can we expect another one like that for Valentine's day?

They are so good, so inspiring, so well written. You should make a point of doing one for every Holiday that exists. :)

Black TulipBlack Tulipover 18 years ago
Nicely

done. Must be hard to restrict yourself to 50 words!

Black Tulip

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Thanks

That's all. Just...thanks.

Rumple ForeskinRumple Foreskinover 18 years ago
I liked that

I think I know how Anon from the United States feels. Thanks, Og. That was nice, and very well done.

Rumple

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
a smile on my face....

thank you Og and happy holidays.

Always, Lizzy

hugo_samhugo_samover 18 years ago
Reminder

An exceedingly well crafted reminder of the spirit of the season in pithy blurbs and covering important ground. Thank you Og.

cookiejarcookiejarover 18 years ago
Awww Og

Now I feel all ooey and gooey inside. Thanks for making me smile. Good luck!

Cookie :)

Unsung MuseUnsung Museover 18 years ago
Very Nice!

Best of luck in the contest!

Colleen ThomasColleen Thomasover 18 years ago
Wisdom

You can't buy it. You can't give it nor get it as a gift. You have to earn it. thanks for the reminders of the spirit that rules this day, so often lost in the more ostentacious celebration

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Very inventive

and imaginative, like I've come to expect your submissions to be. Nicely done. Good luck in the contest.

tickletickletickletickleover 18 years ago
great stuff

being a non american christian, I could only get some of the stories. However, the ones I got, were the ones I loved. Big applause for reminding me the spirit of xmas in so few words.

Aurora BlackAurora Blackover 18 years ago
Bravo, Og!

You reminded me of Aesop's Fables with this entry. The stories are short, sweet and they make you think. Good job!

Honey123Honey123over 18 years ago
It's true

you filled our minds with the spirit of the holidays...

Good luck dearst Ogg...

~Honey

cloudycloudyover 18 years ago
Og, I love this!

Your creativity shines, and you tell an entire story is very few words...I admire you. My favorites were "Brotherhood" (for obvious reasons), "Santa's Grotto," and "Correctness" (the ending phrase "inclusion is not exclusive" is absolutely brilliant).

Boxlicker101Boxlicker101over 18 years ago
Interesting

and humorous, and brought back some very pleasant memories. I especially remember the chains made from strips of colored paper. We used to make them in elementary school but they probably can't do that now.

MargotPaygeMargotPayge12 months ago

This is brilliant. It blurs the line between prose and poetry and you do it so well.

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