All Comments on 'Chocolate Mousse at Hotel Uruguay'

Not bad! You're a very skilled writer, with a flair for strong visualizations.

You stumbled a little when you did the clique characters looking in the mirror to assess their own bodies bit, but it was handled much more originally than others.

Overall, I found it a very hot and quick read.

Absolutely love the set up for the story, the way the characters are drawn and their interactions on the plane. I think a lot of writers forget that you can have more then the two principle characters involved in the plot. Would have loved a little bit more detail in the sex scene, partly because I'm sure you would handle it well, and well, that's also why I'm here. But I enjoyed the story completely

""Mmmm, mama likes you fucking her baby.""

That's paedophilia.

""Mmmm, mama likes you fucking her, baby.""

That's consensual sex.