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All Comments on 'The Girl With The Ego Lego'
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Anonymousover 18 years agoInteresting concept & construct
You do know that "ego" anf "Lego" do not rhyme, don't you??
dcpoet44over 18 years agointeresting twist...
and i tend to think that rhyme isn't what you were after here, but the two go nicely together. i dig that ending:
The girl with the ego Lego
walked on, bag of fragments
rattling at her hip. No wiser,
nothing built.
nice piece......don
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