All Comments on 'I've Hidden Your Wife'

on the honeymoon dud.this private time dumby.i hope it last a year.

acts like one - thinks like a teenager - writes like someone who hasn't grown up yet and may be sick forever - try to grow up - try to realize you aren't the end all - and while talented are walking the wrong life path to be reasonably happy at the end - try to be at least semi-normal for starters.

Sorry to disagree with the other comments - but i found the story very entertaining. Love that she wanted it rough when he found her!!

Sorry to disagree with the other comments - but i found the story very entertaining. Love that she wanted it rough when he found her!!

story for the BDSM category. Seriously, it is a good story. You captured the emotional build-up of dominant, sadistic lust in the main character quite clearly. You also did well in the wife conveying her lust for submission and masochism. And the intimacy of their relationship with Jeri was as clear in the gestures and interactions as it was in words. Nicely done. Please keep writing.

Alas, I might have enjoyed this more had I been in the mood for BDSM, which, you might guess, I was not tonite.

Proper categorisation makes it easier for readers to find authors' offerings that best suit their tastes.

Too many questions about who these people are and why would they let Jeri interfere with their honeymoon. Worst of all - put this crap in BDSM. If he's going to torture her you might have the decency to put it in the right category. If I'm her I go home and file for an annulment. Who wants to be married to a psychopath? Ugly story of stupidity, violence and abuse.

1 star