All Comments on 'Transformation'

You seem to have a formula of this kind of stories. You love the fantasy of rescuing young girls, turning them into new women, then falling love with them. You must be a fan of " My Fair Lady". Then what will you do to deal with the hell of lust belongs to a girl like me?

If I could find a younger woman with all the qualities and knowledge Suzie has, I would be in love, too.

The girl is fantastic.

Very good story. No real problem anywhere; not even Sam.

But being a Horny 'ol Sailor and an all around dirty old man I loved it. Thank You. Ronnie W.

Greywolf, this is the first story of yours that I have read, but I promise it won't be the last one!! This was an incredible story of love. The sex was just icing! The love story was everything a guy could imagine!! Thanks for sharing that !!!

wonderful warm loving story with heart and soul...*sigh* just aren't many men like that in this world anymore are there?...Thank you once again for sharing your stories with us,your fans...and letting us read you. Keep em coming and we'll keep reading...one question though...did you have all these written before and just finally submitted them or are you really pumping them out like a printing press? respectfully your fan in Texas naynay

Out of character for her to suddenly have a date and "don't wait up for me" the night she comes back from plastic surgery. Did she pull this date out of a hat or what?

I certainly enjoyed this tale, so far. I am puzzled where did Susie learn to dance? She was a prisoner for years, yet she pulls Jim on to the dance floor. Someone else questioned where did the date come from on the night her bandages came off. Petty stuff. I thought you did a fine developemnt job on Jim's insecurities

Good story line, but I kept getting confused. The doctor kept changing from Jonas to Jason. Which is it?

Now that I have read it, all I will do is keep looking for the next part. Thanks for a great story.

Well ended -

She was naive at best - foolish at worst but so innocent she was a perfect victim.

He was the knight and they rode off together - nice -

There you go Greyeagle.

This is a nice story that while of course is a fantasy, still has a touch of realism and has no "WTF is he talking about" moments like twin eagle.

I guess, I too wonder about that infamous "I have a date, don't wait up" crap. But, I guess you needed an excuse for him to go away and them realize how much they missed and needed each other.

Well done. Just about to read part 2

FastNed is right. Can't throw that in there and not deal with it.

This story wasn't a complete bomb like the other two I read so far.