I really liked your use of the holiday in this story. You showed us the true meaning of Christmas!
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Anonymous11/20/05
Hot and Sweet
Enjoyed this little hot and sweet story. Keep writing, Megnificent! Dazzle us with more of your holiday sweets!
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Anonymous11/20/05
A happy holiday, indeed
I thought the story was wonderful. The pace was nice and easy, nothing felt too rushed. The erotica was real. By real, I mean like it didn't read like a badly-scripted porn where it's all "hi i'm the plumber" and "oh well thats nice lets fuck" type deal.
The ideas during the "party" were very creative. I plan to use a few myself on my significant other. I'll never look at a candy cane the same way again.
Overall, I gave the story a 5 and it's a story that would very much warm me up during the cold holidays. :)
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Anonymous11/21/05
Good stuff Meg
I think the story was very well written and to the point. Good going Meg. - Derek
English
Interesting
Interesting idea! Good luck in the contest!
Not badly written
but kinda short. Great luck in the contest..
original idea.....
I would have fleshed it out a little (pardon the pun!)...thanks for sharing!
Good luck...
... in the contest. I agree with some of the others I would have panned it out alittle more but I did like the story idea. Happy holidays.
Always, E
Short...
But cute. Good luck!
Cookie :)
Very good story!
I really liked your use of the holiday in this story. You showed us the true meaning of Christmas!
Hot and Sweet
Enjoyed this little hot and sweet story. Keep writing, Megnificent! Dazzle us with more of your holiday sweets!
A happy holiday, indeed
I thought the story was wonderful. The pace was nice and easy, nothing felt too rushed. The erotica was real. By real, I mean like it didn't read like a badly-scripted porn where it's all "hi i'm the plumber" and "oh well thats nice lets fuck" type deal.
The ideas during the "party" were very creative. I plan to use a few myself on my significant other. I'll never look at a candy cane the same way again.
Overall, I gave the story a 5 and it's a story that would very much warm me up during the cold holidays. :)
Good stuff Meg
I think the story was very well written and to the point. Good going Meg. - Derek
How do I get on that invitation list?
A fast paced, fun read. Good luck in the contest.
Rumple
WOW
Really hot story!
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