All Comments on 'Lessons in Biology Ch. 04'

by GuyJD

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
It About Fucking Time!

I've been waiting for you to continue this story for so long. Thank you for the update.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Thanks!

Thanks for finally giving us another installment, so is this the end?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Aww hell!!

U SICK BASTARD!

emj417emj417almost 12 years ago

asinine, stereotyping, cheesy, and slutty--no romance here at all. Please stop writing.

Squgy2Squgy2about 10 years ago
More?

Please tell me there is more to come, I need to know if Mark and Ebony will stay together. Will Mark, Alex and Ebony still play together when she's in college?

GuyJDGuyJDover 8 years agoAuthor
FEEDBACK WANTED!

Over the past decade, I've gotten mixed reactions about this chapter. For those who enjoyed it, I'm glad that I was able to entertain your erotic imaginations. Those who disliked it or was offended, my greatest apologies. I will do a better job on Chaoter 5.

PLEASE FEEL FREE TO PM ME AND LET ME KNOW WHERE YOU WOULD LIKE TO SEE ME GO WITH THIS SERIES. FOR STARTERS, I AM CONSIDERING ADVANCING THE TIME OF THE STORY TO A YEAR. EBONY IS A SENIOR AND PREPARING FOR HER GRADUATION AND PROM.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
great

I thought it was a great story it was not about love to start off with but seX and founding out what turns her on and gets her off . Even if it takes one or two males it was about the experience. I like the title biology because at the end of the story is when they found out they have more then sexual chemistry with each other

Toriahot13Toriahot13over 2 years ago

Was good until the end. Feels incomplete because don’t know what happened in with Mark and Ebony. Would have rated 5 if you finished or if you ever finish the story

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