All Comments on 'As You Rain'

As a sky that

opens to spill it's drops

upon the thirsty earth below

The ground awaits her eruption,

to take in all that she can give.

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Love it. Slow n sunsual. I love that feeling right before tha rain. You have captured the during and what imagery !!!

Some great phrases and it's smooth my friend. Picturesque setting, waiting for the eruption ~ Very nice poem, think I might have to reread, 'cause I like how it feels ~

More please ~!!!!!

this summer, so can relate to this on a more general level. The trees need water to survive, and relationships need "sustenance" to blossom and grow. Nice analogy!!

Hmmmmmm ~

Nice write ~

Thinking...

And as her branches enfold the sky

Bringing love's nutrients to the earth...

Yep, ya done good here.

Loved it! Thanks!

Curiouswife

breaking the dam of emotions (~_~) great write

...let it rain. I feel your words falling on me like the rain...and it feels so good.

ty,bd

The joys of rainfall ~ hearing it splattering down smell the fresh earth saturated once again.

You rock baby !!!

I'll read all your poems. I enjoy them all.