has been mentioned in the New Poems review thread on the Poetry Feedback and Discussion forum.
I wish the poem could have been presented as three lines.
yeh, yeh, yeh
wrens - gets a 100 from me, as atonement, been on a wren wrecking kick of late
but as far as haiku go, you are one of the best of the white men
i understand this, thank you. :)
You've captured a moment of time and described it in the most wonderful way.Perfect!
Feels like you've created a moment in time.
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