Gender Issues

No matter the genre, your stories are hot!

I usually only read the BDSM stories, but you write so well that once I finished your stories in that category, I moved on to your others. You can really WRITE!

Fabulous!!! Magnificent!!!

Please write more (and more about them. DAMN that was hot --- and Oh! did I want to be either of them.

"Like a scythe"

"The thought struck me that this wasn't something you did with a girl you just met, but some madness had taken hold of both of us and none of the normal rules applied. She was a boy, she was a girl; I was gay, I was straight; it was the beginning of the new year, the end of the old, and somewhere the shadow of midnight was sweeping over the face of the earth, headed westward like a scythe."

There is nothing in the heavens or on the earth that is sexier than liminality. That little space-between is the Alpha and Omega of pure erotic power; even to name it is to step out of it.

What you've done here is to outline that liminal space. You've described the borders around it in such living quivering roaring life-filled detail that the reader can see where the space itself is, and be drawn into it. Not just read about it: step into it.

Quite extraordinary. Thank you.

Wow!

I too almost needed to be scraped up off of the floor after reading that one.

Perfection

That was one of the best stories that I have ever read. It wasn't so much as it got me aroused, but there was so much more. It sucked me in. The language, the frantic thoughts, the realizations. It was one of those stories that sucks you in, has your eyes not wanting to blink because they'll miss a word, your heart racing as hard as the characters, and your body burning for a touch. Amazing.

Amazing.

In all my time reading different stories on here, I've never wanted to re-read one as soon as it was over. I never even realized this was one of my fantasies until you put it in such exciting and powerful words. That is honestly the best story I've read on here, well done and please please PLEASE keep writing!

Superb

I've been thinking about gender-neutral erotica, and how much I'd like to read and, possibly, write it. This is emphatically not gender neutral, but I love the way it confronts gender. And I love how it's fantastically hot. I don't know how many times I've masturbated to this story: the best I can do is "many."

After reading hundreds of stories on this site, I continue returning to this one. It is easily the best written story on Literotica.com and deserves a sixth star.

OUT of this WORLD!!!

Couldn't stop reading ... couldn't wait for the ending I knew was coming ... Didn't want it to end ... I knew in my heart, the ending was really only the beginning ... Love knows no Gender, Sex doesn't really care about Gender, Relationships are built on trust, respect, admiration, and attraction ... again Gender really doesn't enter in to the formula ...

Your imagination is Amazing, your writing talents are equally Awesome ... Please continue to share your ability with your fans and we will continue to shower you with well earned praise.


Always looking forward to your next lust driven story. Thank You.

My Fantasy I didn't know I had

Still coming down from the excitement high of this story as I write this. You are amazing. Please, please, please don't stop writing. You have a gift. Thank you for sharing it.

(And I know what my next costume will be)

Hot to trot

If I was a girl I'd be asking your address.

You know the girl's address???

Wow!

Incredible.

Easily the best erotic fiction I have ever read.

Your vivid descriptions of the environment, the way it looked, sounded and smelled put me right in the room with them so that I could see what was happening. The way you described the emotion of them on the dance floor to when they went upstairs absolutely pulled me in. It wasn't overwritten like so many erotic fiction authors fall victim to and you kept it all tied together in a kinky little package. Bravo to you for sharing such a wonderful story. I would love to read more of your work.

I Wish

Brilliant Story, I hope that this is real that you got to enjoy the pleasure of such a hot, amazing, just wow!

Delicious.

Great story!

Great story told in stunning detailed attention to raw emotions!

Grrr

I just voted 1 star meaning to vote 5! Grr. This is hot!

That was probably the hottest piece of erotic fiction I've ever read.

I feel the need to say a very sincere thank you for writing it.

Intense, incredible

What an amazing snapshot of desire; just desire, without judgement or preconception or boundaries. This was hot erotica for sure, but also a keen insight into gender roles and what is required to transcend them.

Holy Shit

This is quite possibly one of the best short stories I've ever read. Of ANY genre.

I first read this a while ago, and I thought it was the hottest piece of erotica I've ever read in my life. And stupidly, I forgot to bookmark it, and now, a long time afterwards, after a huge (see:gigantic, massive, etc) amount of searching, I manage to find it again, and it's still just as good.

Only comment I can make is put better tags on this! "genderqueer" "gender" "drag king" "female cross-dresser" etc, if it had better tags I wouldn't have lost the story in the first place!

Love this story

fucking LOVED it!!

Especially all the biting! Yum :D

INFERNO

Stupendous. Smoking inferno. You give us all all a psyclogical and physical orgasm that are so HOTT. We have slippery cunts and dribbling cocks after so many orgasms. We're hooked into reading and re reading reaching new heights every time. I can't wait for more. Erotic masterpiece.

Now...

Now, THAT is sex.

you conveyed an atmosphere...........

Never mind that it was freaking HOT!! I loved your description of the party and participants. I haven't been to parties like that in years, and had me nostalgic. Well done!!!

Best. Ever.

An exceptionally well written story that made me quite jealous and unbelievably turned on.

So hot

This is a great erotic story

I loved this. The writer took me to places I have never thought of....
I would love to read more stories if you have them.
This one was incredibly sexy.........

Only

WOW

Rubbish

I bet your pick is as big as your brain pea size

Gold standard

I just can't remember when I have read a better erotic story........fantastic plot and character development and such incredibly hot sex it was unbelievably intense :))

Wonderful

That was so beautiful, but in a delightfully unusual way. I'm breathless!

one of the .....

One of the very best story tellers.

So intensly incredible

The slow buildup, the sexual tension, then the climax, I so wanted to be there myself. Great story.

loved it

the loved this tale. It was different and just a little crazy in a good way. a little
of out of the box thinking. some play acting between them but no real
gay stuff . good tale

Wow

I've never felt compelled to comment on a story here, but this is easily the best story I've read. You are a fantastic writer.

Relentlessly building to a climax and more?

Loved it. Made me as breathless reading it as our protagonist - what a metaphor for gender confusion and the challenges of keeping up as we age. Just loved it. Made me hot. Made me wet. You are the master, Dr.!

xoxo,
Di