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Unbelievable!
What a way to wake up! The story held me in its grip; the sex scene was raw and incredibly erotic. What an incredible ride this was! Good luck dr_m!
Cookie :)
I just have one thing to say
Holy Fuck!!! That was hot!! Okay, I feel better. I need to go sit in a snowdrift now. Have a nice day.
Great Story
That was beyond HOT. Whew!! My dick is hard and my face is flushed.
Good luck...
... in the contest and happy holidays dr_m
Always, E
Gender Bender
This story had me from beginning to end. I'm still flushed! Your exploration of gender was superb. Labels, labels... "everyone's everything." Brilliant! How the tables turn, and turn again, and the heat stays so intense. *gulp* Fantastic, job, doc... don't ever stop! :)
Perfect.
No words.
Prostrate at your feet.
wow!!
hotter than Hades, and a perfect mix of erotic vs. non erotic elements. Extremely well written, rises far above the typical stroke story. Good luck in the contest!
About Time!
Finally, after years of reading "queer" erotica, someone actually steps up and blows the pretenders out of the water! As a gender bender myself....thankyou, you captured not only the sex, the emotional release, but also my heart.
Simply Outstanding!
This is one of the most well-written stories that I have seen on Lit. It passes the run-of-the-mill stories at lightspeed and doesn't look back. There is such a level of intimacy that is shared with the reader that I could easily see this as a passage from a best sellng book. Great job!
Excellent
Very original and different, maybe out there for some folks...
Loved the way you covered the emotions, lust and dark psyche we all keep inside of us - Very well writen!! Thanks
First time...
This really is the first time I've given a 5 rating to a story. Despite a little confusion about when it slipped out of her and fell to the floor, it was very good.
outstanding
Truly excellant erotic storytelling. thank you
Hot
yes, of course. But this was so much more than an erotic story. I loved the way you captured the mood of the party, the cliques and how you took me on a journey into a form of sexuality that is not dictated by gender, but by lust, love, the need to share.
Black Tulip
Obligatory 5 bomb
Just kidding, doc. You work here is always in the top 1% ... so the 5s are well-deserved. Happy holidays & good luck in the contest. ~Imp
One of those "hard to put down" reads
The enthusiastic comments are understandable. The plotting, setting, and use of characters were what we've come to expect from the good Doctor.
Rumple
Zoot alors!!!
It's stuff like this that proves the pleasure of a text for me: "She was wearing little black socks that matched her dildo. They almost broke my heart."
A delight all in all.
omg.
this is the best story ive ever read on literotica. you are a fantastic writer. this story sent me over the edge the way you captured everything. i hope you do win.
im looking extremely forward to reading you other stories.
keep on writing!
Powerful stuff, Doc
I'm not sure if I actually 'enjoyed' it, but sure as heck I couldn't stop reading! There are a few writers around here that make me stop and wonder if I'm kidding myself, trying to be a writer, and you're one of them. Excellent work.
Good god dayum, Zoot!
You've left me dry mouthed and speechless.
:)
simply put..this story was AMAZING! Extremely erotic and well-written. I second the person who said sometimes they wonder if they're kidding themselves trying to be a writer. This story not only had great plot, but great excitement and energy. Left me hot and wanting more :)
Happy Holidays (hope mine are as good as this story :)) and good luck in the contest. Not that u'll need it with a story like this.
I have to admit, I only read this because
I'm working my way through the holiday contest stories. Then you caught me up in your narrative, and I read the sucker twice--once quickly and greedily, and again more slowly to savor the details and language.
What a marvellous story.
Doc, You've Done it Again
Even though I don't normally read fetish stories, yours was a very interesting and stirring tale. Good job and good luck.
Exquisite
A pleasure from start to finish on all counts. Moving, racy and real.
Wow. I'm exhausted!
What a workout. I lost count of the possible combinations, around the same time I stopped grinning and started squirming around in my chair.
Oh my.
mY head is spinning
!
Phenomenal
This is more than just insanely hot, this is also fascinating literature.
I usually hide my literotica reading from my husband, but he's got to read this. It is simply excellent.
Bravo!
amazing...
I'm trying to think of something intelligent to say, but my brains just left the building.
If I may be so presumptuous, and if I may be so bold, it's the mate to my story- in a way.
We're not in Kansas anymore
Holy cow that was hot. The writing was so good that it is beyond my ability to praise it sufficiently.
absolutely the best!
amazing, marvelous, erotic, sensual, bizarre, and dynamic. The build up was perfect and the climax. . . well the climax was climatic. Hmmm.
thanks
First comment I've ever made. . .EVER
This might be the most intelligently written, HOT, HOT, HOT erotic story I have EVER read. Smart and freaky, what a great combo. Please keep 'em cumming (and me too).
I was BLOWN Away!
I have been reading submissions from literotica for a long time. This story caught me from the very first sentence. It rocked!! It was explosive!! It was a damn good story!!! Rock on Dude!!!
apparently
you've been peeking in on my personal fantasies. Thanks for writing this. Thank you so much.
There are stories AND...
there are once-in-a-lifetime events. What I just read is much closer to the later. I wonder if the woman downstairs owns a man's suit?
A novel in the making
I am an avid reader of anything and everything, so I found myself totaly engrossed in the story, a story that I felt could have been found in a bestselling Phillip Marlowe detective novel. The descriptive phrasing and the building pace was perfect. I salute your abilities and wish for more. Oh, did I mention the lady character was HOT HOT HOT.
Gorgeous
Absolutely amazing, have only seen a few stories as good as this one. Keep it coming
Mind bending
I've been reading submissions on here for a long time. Yours is far and away the best I have ever read to date, by kilometers and miles.
What you wrote was captivating in an erotic sense, satisfying in a sexual sense, but fascinating and enthralling in an intellectual sense that I wasn't expecting. Writing like this is what I love to find in short stories, and novels.
Reading-events like this, things that change the way I think: that is what makes outstanding writing.
I feel light headed!
Someone pass me the smelling salts. So hot, I drooled all over the computer monitor. Loved the fantastically surreal setting. And it tugged at my heart as well. More, more, more!
WOW!
Fucking fantastic! Loved all of the gender-bending fun. Your vocabulary/syntax was spot-on, greatly adding to the overall experience. Too often, marvelous ideas are mangled by poor style/writing. Thankfully, your piece shows insight, emotion, and succinctness. Thanks for a great story.
Michelle Hunt
(a happily married female who digs hot sex in any and all forms)
HOTT!!
My friend,
You have the "gift". You're story is THE BEST overall sex story I've read on this site!! And I've been reading stuff on here since 2001. Amazing work!
Keep it up!! You cold go big time!
Thank You!
WHAT A STORY
What a terrific story.You made it sound so real I could almost imagine being at the party.I'm going to make a point of going to a fancy dress party this new years eve ,who knows,I might get lucky.Excellent.
Perfect
This is the most amazing story I've ever read on here - it has everything you could want in an erotic story delivered with real style and pace
WOW!
I'm speechless...which is in itself a rarity...great story!
WOW!!!
amazing absolutely amazing
Perfect. Abso-fucking-lutely perfect.
Dr. Mabeuse, that was the single hottest story I have ever read in my entire life. You have written the story to which all others will forever be compared. Congratulations!
5th time i've read this
cant get enough. amazing.
Fantastic story
Your writing prose is fantastic. It seemed as if I was the writer of the story myself. Great job. You should write professionally.
Are you kidding me???
That has got to be the hottest damn story I have ever read... And I have read A LOT OF 'EM!! If you aren't professional, you definitely should look into it... I thought I was there, and I want to go back!!!
Wow I'm blown away
This story is ultra HOT
Only one thing I wuold change
Why would he want to use a rubber? He should have shoved it into her naked. She had nothing to fear, and he could have exploded hot cum into her boy-ass...
None Better!
One of the best stories I have ever read at this site. Bravo!!
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