I really enjoyed this. I can see myself and my husband in the begining. We're playful like that, throwing snowballs at each other and such. Thanks for the story. Good Luck! K.
I almost didn't submit my story because it was written in second person, but seeing your's here gave me a bit of courage. You wrote a beautifully erotic romantic story.
English
Good story Lady Jayne
Good story... good luck in the contest.
Good luck...
... in the contest and happy holidays.
Always, E
I love
winter sex outside...it's so amazing. Great job, good luck in the contest.
Romantic
What a wonderful, romantic, and loving story. Well done. Thanks
simply nice....
pleasant and easy to read....thanks for sharing!
Nice!
Warm & wonderful... a real pleasure to read.
Thanks for sharing & very best of luck to you in the contest!
Very Nice
I really enjoyed this. I can see myself and my husband in the begining. We're playful like that, throwing snowballs at each other and such. Thanks for the story. Good Luck! K.
Ahhh romance ...
Tis the season. Good luck!
Cookie :)
"tis the season to be jolly"
Excellent story, had everything one looks for.
Wish you all the best in the competition.
Well-written second-person story
That's one of the better jobs of writing in second person that I've come across. Congratulations and good luck in the contest.
Rumple
Very nice!!
I almost didn't submit my story because it was written in second person, but seeing your's here gave me a bit of courage. You wrote a beautifully erotic romantic story.
Trees = Horny!
Very romantic and hot story, LJ! It gave me tingles. Good luck!
sweet!
What a sweet, sexy story! I usually look for 'naughtier' stories, but I loved this. It's like a nice little glimpse of my boyfriend and me.
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