with loving wives? or did you just put it there out of habit?
;-)
by
11/19/05
Obviously it's someone else's loving wife!
And that's okay with me.
This is every 18 year old's wet dream!
I can see my problem now, I was just too healty!
Nice story.
by
Anonymous11/19/05
Gosh It's Trying eh bobbie
As talented as you are why doesn't the wizzard have a brain?? Is there anyone in this story worth a shit - no not really - the kid hates everything & is a dud - the loving wife with kids is a guilty whore and the nurse is an old slut without a heart - all this and no yellow brick road to like.
With your talent and imagination what the hell are you doing defacing it with lower slabobia type crap anyone can type. Cynically isn't a biggie as not to many people get it or like it.
I saw some "H"'s back a few so I'm confused - help me understand this lowering to other levels? Is occilation in vogue or is it the snow blindness?
by
Anonymous11/19/05
Shit man
I just go to the end and read who's wife fucked who and if her husband liked it then give you the usual zero(usual because sometimes......)
Shit man....it's the holidays. I think I'll give you a good cheer "2".
p.s thanks for leaving the comments turned on. They are sometimes more entertaining then the stories(present company excluded of course...sometimes)
by
Anonymous11/19/05
Good stuff
Bob you are the man !! Your stories always get a reaction out of me. Keep up the good work!!
Bob, your stories are always great, and the only problem with this one is that it was too short.
I don't understand the people who leave comments here about how they hate the "slut wife" genre. Why do they even read Literotica? I suppose it's because they can't stand the thought that other people may actually enjoy the stories, or perhaps they are so morally stunted that they feel that THIER morals are the only ones that count.
Keep up the good work, and ignore the anon naysayers.
A great story. But where is her hubby when she is visiting you? Waiting downstairs in the lobby? Maybe she wants to make all this up to you further by having your baby and working on this after you are discharged from the hospital? There is a lot of room in this story for future chapters, and knowing your writing style I think you can come up with something along that line?
I wasn't expecting the sex to occur so abruptly. It might have been more meaningful if they had more time to develop the "pre-sex" relationship. The first part of the story was very good, and I was eventually expecting some kind of epiphany leading to his new found love of Christmas. Instead, the second half was merely a good stroke story. This could have been really great....darn
Is she was loving and she was a wife. *wink* The answer to a teenage boy's prayers. Good luck!
Cookie :)
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11/19/05
*laughs gently*
Ya know I left your submission until last today because I enjoy your other stories... I wasn't disappointed... I was giggling at the end with a smile on my face... thank you for posting this.
English
um, what does this have to do
with loving wives? or did you just put it there out of habit?
;-)
Obviously it's someone else's loving wife!
And that's okay with me.
This is every 18 year old's wet dream!
I can see my problem now, I was just too healty!
Nice story.
Gosh It's Trying eh bobbie
As talented as you are why doesn't the wizzard have a brain?? Is there anyone in this story worth a shit - no not really - the kid hates everything & is a dud - the loving wife with kids is a guilty whore and the nurse is an old slut without a heart - all this and no yellow brick road to like.
With your talent and imagination what the hell are you doing defacing it with lower slabobia type crap anyone can type. Cynically isn't a biggie as not to many people get it or like it.
I saw some "H"'s back a few so I'm confused - help me understand this lowering to other levels? Is occilation in vogue or is it the snow blindness?
Shit man
I just go to the end and read who's wife fucked who and if her husband liked it then give you the usual zero(usual because sometimes......)
Shit man....it's the holidays. I think I'll give you a good cheer "2".
p.s thanks for leaving the comments turned on. They are sometimes more entertaining then the stories(present company excluded of course...sometimes)
Good stuff
Bob you are the man !! Your stories always get a reaction out of me. Keep up the good work!!
Great as always...
Bob, your stories are always great, and the only problem with this one is that it was too short.
I don't understand the people who leave comments here about how they hate the "slut wife" genre. Why do they even read Literotica? I suppose it's because they can't stand the thought that other people may actually enjoy the stories, or perhaps they are so morally stunted that they feel that THIER morals are the only ones that count.
Keep up the good work, and ignore the anon naysayers.
Very erotic and natural and meaningful
A great story. But where is her hubby when she is visiting you? Waiting downstairs in the lobby? Maybe she wants to make all this up to you further by having your baby and working on this after you are discharged from the hospital? There is a lot of room in this story for future chapters, and knowing your writing style I think you can come up with something along that line?
rather interesting...
I wasn't expecting the sex to occur so abruptly. It might have been more meaningful if they had more time to develop the "pre-sex" relationship. The first part of the story was very good, and I was eventually expecting some kind of epiphany leading to his new found love of Christmas. Instead, the second half was merely a good stroke story. This could have been really great....darn
All I can say...
Is she was loving and she was a wife. *wink* The answer to a teenage boy's prayers. Good luck!
Cookie :)
*laughs gently*
Ya know I left your submission until last today because I enjoy your other stories... I wasn't disappointed... I was giggling at the end with a smile on my face... thank you for posting this.
Always, E
He better NEVER complain
about Christmas again! At eighteen I would have let a woman run over me if I thought she would treat me that way afterwards!
More, please!
How about a 2nd chapter in which Bobby gets a little more TLC? Maybe nurse Mabel or even a cute female doctor could also help Bobby out.
That's One Hot Healthcare Honey
Nicely done. A neat twist (hospital sex that doesn't involve a sexy nurse) with a well-used touch of humor. Good luck in the contest.
Rumple
Now that's socialized medicine!!
A true bipartisan health improvement plan!
One of the very few that we enjoy from JPB...
As previously stated, 98.1% of JPB's stories are dog shit but the 1.9% that are not are typically great stories.
That was cute
So I rated it 4****
Hilarious!
Great short and sweet. It gave me some humor when I needed a distraction from my own problems and JPB delivered. Thank you!
From the one and only
JPB!
Meh
thanks for the offering.
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