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Excellent start
I think this is your best story yet! Very engaging - well done!
This has shades of 'been there, done that'....
I love this story. I dated 2 of the bosse's virgin daughters back in high school. But I left them that way cause he was a big Itallian.
good job
this was one of your best,would like to see them married and he doing mom too.
you got me,
i was so into the story, it is a great read. when i was reading the comments, i thought 'who is the author?' almost died laughing when i got to 'Just Plain Bob.' i knew it was you when i started, but so different from your normal, i completely forgot that fact while reading and didn't realize until i looked it up at the end. excellent so far. a fan always.
You Got Me 2
This really deserved 1000 but I'm scared. Why? Not because this was so well written (as usual) but the tone and subject matter is somewhat (cmon - way) different than your usal fare.
Now I'm not complaining - as for a long time I have asked you to write more for us semi-normal folks only to see you bob and weave amongst the old tired humiliation and a semi-begrudging compromise that still had negative irony or worse.
Here your talents are sterling - the way you can without many to match you. The imagination is facinating, the shifts in path are unanticipated but acceptable as a part of someones possible life. In short, damn this is very entertaining and sensual!
Thanks Author - now please close it credibly with a human, semi-suitable tone and circumstance for a four base bagger - ok?
with high anticipatory Regard
Another good read
I like the way your stories are headed and this one looks like it could be one of your best. Keep up the good work. PAPATOAD
WOW!
One of your best. Looking forward to the next chapter.
foxe
Very good
That was a very good read and your best story yet. It is clear that you spent more time than usual on this story. Thanks
Yikes
Where were the Melissas when I was young?
Good chapter and looking forward to the one where pappy kills him.
Great reading!
I am looking forward to more chapters of this wonderful, yet childish and funny story!
build up good
The build up and back story were so good, it was disappointing that the actual sex was so quick - almost an obstacle to be overcome in the story rather than the climax
False statement
In every Southern state except Texas, Louisana, and Florida, the age of consent is 16 or under. In Texas and Louisana the age of consent is 17, and in Florida the age of consent is 16 if the guy is under age 23. Therefore, the statement she had to be age 18 is false and, since stories with false statements deserve a lower rating, instead of 5*****s I rated the 3***s.
Good start
But Melissa has disaster written all over her. I hope he starts carrying a recorder and records every conversation that he has with her for protection. Otherwise she's going to get him canned.
Huh?
"I opened it and found a Polaroid of a naked Mellisa wearing a skimpy bikini and a pair of high heels."
If she's wearing a bikini how can she be naked?
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