Worth It

Well Done!

applause, applause

Enjoyable read...

"Yep, because nothing says romance like a parasitic, poisonous plant."

Best. Line. Ever.

The God Damned Card Table

How well I remember. You must have been down that road too. The only thing I didn't get was sis (which would have been great), but I sure experienced all of the rest. Thanks for the memories. Ronnie W.

Absolutely stellar

Your story was well written and plotted out. It was balanced enough that it was a pleasant read and had me thinking I was reading an erotic romance novel. Keep up the good work.

Nicely done

and fantastic to make us guess what happens next. Good luck in the contest.

Endearing, sweet story

Thanks! A very timely holiday story, sweet and just long enough to do some very significant character development.

Great Dialogue!

The dialogue and brother/sister banter in this was fantastically done! Good luck in the contest! :)

Very erotic and natural

Need more chapters to this erotic story. Do you continue with your college with Sis cuming to live with you so you can start your own family? Or do you impregnate her and blame if on the old boyfriend as far as your parents are concerned, until such time you can graduate from college, come home and set everything straight with your parents?

Beautiful story...

I really hope you continue it!
P.S. Please post ch.5 of "The Family Room" soon.

very good....

much better than usual for this genre....good luck in the contest!

Good luck...

... in the contest. Sometimes... the best laid plans get completely shot to hell... when love gets involved.

Always, E

Nicely Done

But surely you're not going to let the story end here, are you?

Wonderful!

I thoroughly enjoyed this. One of the best I've read in a long, long time.

good read

i'm not so into brother and sister story, but tis one is tastefully written. well, i'm a fan, can't complain much anyways. worth the wait alright

Quit while you are ahead

Most of us have been around enough to know the details of making love. The interesting part is THE CHASE

Loved it

Loved it all. Like real natural and beautiful

Well done....

Its been at least a month since I've read a story on this site thats held my interest as much as this one. I can't wait for the next chapter. Very well written.

Like Everyone Else Said. . .

this was well written. Captured my attention from the start and held it to the end even though I knew where the story was going. Thanks and Good Luck!

Wonderful story!

A very good read, well written and a nice story line.

Great job

Don't usually read this kind, but very good. You're a great writer.

Great!!

Your usual great standard and, thankfully, you're not going to let the story end here when we are just getting interested! I am looking forward to "Worth It Still".
What about "The Family Room Ch.05"?

Good Shit....

Dude this was the best one I have ever read.... fucking hott!

WOW!!!

thank you for allowing me to cum tonight while i was reading this. it was a great story...

WOW!!!

thank you for allowing me to cum tonight while i was reading this. it was a great story...

Im about to get mushy!

Forgive me for being a little sappy, but this story was truly beautiful! It totally brought out the romantic in me! I wish I had a brother that loved me that much, not to mention one to fuck the hell out of me!

Excellent! Very romantic

The writing is very good and everything seems so real and solid. I look forward to reading the rest of your stories!

rox

like everyone's said this storyz hot...keep ritin man...this gud shit!

Woweee

One of the greatest love stories ever.....too damn good man

loved it

so romantic,
i loved it

GREEEEAAATTTTTTTT

AWSUMMM....JUST AWSUMMM>>>>AMAZINN.....very well brought out...n ooo man is it hot or wat!....keep writing dude!

really great story

this is why they should have more stories like this with love and put some kids in it for them to have other stories that have no baby in it or no love sucks do another maybe her having a baby

Absolutely amazing.

So romantic, not to mention hot.

Awfully romantic.

Well, saying this story was excellent would be an understatement. this was probably the best story i ever came across. Keep writing man. Best of luck...

Thank you!

Excellent story! Well written, well edited and well, erotic!

kind of sneaked up

But then that's usually the way right? Years and years of knowing everything and then you know what you've been waiting to hear all those years. Now the fat is in the fire, and what a fire it will be. Too bad anyone close gets burned too. Then...that's the way it sometimes happens right? Good luck to them...They'l need it...

HOT VERY HOT

wow love the story very good keep up the good work

Fantastic!

Hands down the best story i've read on this site. Some other stories have been hot and others romantic but this one was a perfect fit of both and it was funny, which is hard to write. Great job and keep writing!!

Loved it!

I can't wait to read the second one! I must say that Rebecca's talk about pregnancy made me think that she was already pregnant, so the car scene and the withdrawal had me a little confused, but since she didn't tell him to fill her up, I guess she was just anticipating the inevitable fate that will await her in the next chapter? I hope so!

Really liked it.

Amazing dialogue: well-written, thoughtfully conceived, and superbly executed. Their banter is what made this story. You have a gift! I look forward to more. =)

Exotic Buffalo

I'm still laughing over that! Thanks for making this New Yorker laugh!

By far my favourite author. you really do have a great talent i know its unlikely but i would for you to write some more my email is westwood873@hotmail.com

One of my favorites

The story Worth It has been one of my favorites since the first day I found literotica. In fact it was the first story I decided to read when I found the site. It's an amazing piece that has inspired me and one that I keep re-reading over and over again. Amazing work. I also enjoy the Blessings series and The Family Room series. Thanks for the awesome stories.

Mused #1

This is the first story by Mused that I've read, but it certainly won't be the last! It had the kind of reality about it that I love to find in my reading, and that is sadly missing in most porn. Keep it up!!

Good story!!

This was a good story. It kind of sucked that she didn't wait to give Connor her virginity. Other than that, the story was pretty good. 4**** could have been 5. toby9790.

Kind of a shame she was used goods; as he wasn't it's obvious that her love for him isn't strong enough. kind of gross, really.

Perfect

Very well done with a sweet ending to boot. Thank you

Sweet, romantic, funny, perfect. Thank you

Well Done

The love of siblings can make you do strange things - until you live with the truth. Well written - would like to see more. Great writing.

Before I even comment on the story I thought I'd share my disgust that I'm sure others feel with the tard below who thinks:
"Kind of a shame she was used goods; as he wasn't it's obvious that her love for him isn't strong enough. kind of gross, really."

Well sorry everyone can't be an eternal virgin till they find their true love like you. Oh wait, thats right, you're not a virgin by choice! ...and when you do eventually get laid it won't be a virgin, she'll be some old, tired woman who has decided just to settle even though you are an asshat, but at least your job has decent health insurance and you finish in under five minutes so she can get back to the book she was reading. ;)

....anyway I was going to say the story was pretty good and I was happy there wasnt any confrontation with the greaser jerk, but I just realized there was a part two. Looks like the motorcycle driving by still might come up in the next part, though I hope not.
Thanks for the story :)

because of the category we all knew where it was heading

even so, it went from absent, but protective older brother at Thanksgiving, to on the grandparents bed under mistletoe pretty darn fast.