All Comments on 'Pleasure in Control Ch. 13'

I am glad to see that Linda removed the LDT rules. Can't wait to see where else that leads you.

Another great installment, quality writing, pacing and well defined characters. Does this mean there are only 4 chapters left Julia?

Hope you're already dreaming up a sequel (maybe they go international?) or a totally new tale. Living in London will never be the same, it's getting tougher to walk past Selfridges, let alone Rigby and Pellar!!

Mwah!

I will never be able to ride in a lift (elevator) without thinking of this chapter. Think people will wonder why the smile??? Now I have to wait for chapter 14 :-( Happy Holidays!

The combination of wanton desire, hot sex and fear of discovery in the lift made this chapter my favorite so far. And yes, I've read every one! Keep up the great writing.

i love these stories der fuckin awsum. should b a book

These chapters get better and better - I have also read them all. Can hardly wait to get to the others. What a writer - is this from experience or imagination only? An uplifting experience!!

Enjoy it? I simply can't leave it alone! It's brilliant, but I must take another break.

"You must go out and fuck them in the changing rooms and send detailed written reports back to me. OK?"

I couldn't resist copying this line from Linda's words on the new policy. Passionella has evolved into a sophisticated sexual locale, with sex becoming the main stock in trade. And Julia at the center of the changes.

And Julia finally makes it with the first non-employee of the firm, Xara, who seems likely to become important to Julia -- with her own ideas and fully able to create adventures beyond the creaky elevator. "Out of order," indeed!

Could Xara and Linda become rivals for Julia's loyalty -- or at least for her vulnerable pussy? Each could control her, each could bend her to their will...am I wrong to see Julia in more than a little danger?

Kisses, Justine