Sarah, Jane and Dan Experiment

Drunk sex is always a turn off

Personally I can't stand being around drunks so I quit reading pretty quickly.

I gave it a 5 so as not to sound nasty. I would have read the story through if the characters had been sober.

BALANCE

Better to be drunk than moronic!

I have read your story and enjoyed it. I give it 100% to balance the lunatic who rates and criticises stories without reading them.

Superb

I think it was a really good story. i hope nobody regretted it and by the sounds of it no one was too drunk. If that was going to happen to me, i'd like to have it happen in a fairly similiar way!!

BRAVO!

You have a real gift for letting your characters creep inch by inch into temptation... beautifully done! It's going on my "favorites" list!

Excellent!

The perfect blend of dialogue and description, and the gradual exploration of mutual desires was extremely arousing. Please, keep up the good work!

Great!

The escalation was perfectly done. Really seemed like it could (and hopefully did) happen in real life.

good story

Not sure how you could improve on this story, but hope you keep trying. One of the hottest reads I have had in a while.

e-gads, What happened to the rest of the story?

I know this is a dumb question, but you can't just get up and leave at this pont. Just when Sarah is going to be talked into licking some pussy for the first time in her young life. Please hurry with the next installment. This story is everything it should be with two wild and crazy girls. But get Sarah down there and put her to work satisfying Jane. Hurry, Please.

Good Story

This is a very good story but you need to add more to it.

Please add a lot more to it.

Thanks

loved it

That was a good quick read without being unbelievable. You draw the characters in to a situation which, with a tiny leap of faith, is entirely plausible. I love how you do that, you never ask us to just accept the things that happen in your stories, you always justify them in some way.

hot stuff

great story seems plausible even

great great great!

This is what we have always wanted! Where can we find Sarah?