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All Comments on 'Two Stiff Ones for Julie'

by BradCarson

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Jerry WalfellJerry Walfellover 18 years ago
Don't be afraid . . .

It's OK--you can put more than one sentence in a paragraph, and if you do, the story will even start to flow, rather than just jerk . . . ing . . .a . . . long. Try it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Good but...

This would be a lot better if you didn't keep switching the tenses on us.

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