All Comments on 'Five and a half letter'

How can anyone not be moved

by moving writing such as this

and a wish for innocence of bygone days?

and the progression is very believable...have you actually lived it?

you give me tears to start my day? tears that needed to fall like rain.

Thanks!

This speaks emotionally withour being mawkish. A definite five,

Tess

The ending made the poem. Loved it. Thanks!

Curiouswife

i'll read more of you.

This literally gave me a lump in my throat and tears in my eyes...it's lovely...so very lovely..

~Honey

Moving, yes.

Poetry, no.

This poem was selected from Lit's archive of over 39,000 poems for inclusion in today's Archival Review.<br>

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