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Learning to Swim

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by Anonymous

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by LeBroz11/22/05

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Now this is a fun little read;
just picturing it in my mind...

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by Anonymous11/23/05

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This poem was mentioned in the new poems review thread.

Tess

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by sack11/23/05

my favorite poem of late....

a perfectly proportioned little gem!

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by SavgeWolf11/23/05

clear...

...easy...images...I like!

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by Anonymous11/23/05

This is amazing!

A very strong poem with a wonderfully subtle touch. You have handled the metaphor and the imagery deftly, CW!

Fly

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by dcpoet4411/27/05

the part about....

smacking rob was a good one. overall its message is clear....nice.......don

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