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A Day at the Office

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous11/26/05

warm!!

oh very nice
would have liked more transition from irritable to turned on for the supervisor

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by Anonymous11/27/05

Good firststart

Nice job. I am interested to see where you take it. You definitely have talent. Keep it up!!

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by Anonymous11/27/05

GREAT START

Now have the boss do humiliating and embarrasing things to the assistant and her boyfriend. I LOVE this one

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by Anonymous11/27/05

hot

pleae give us more

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by Anonymous11/28/05

great story

Would have liked to read more, want to know what happens next! Great story

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by jimnfelix02/12/06

Good Start

More, more, more! However, you need to work on your nouns and pronouns: their misuse made it difficault to keep the excitement up.

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by Anonymous08/14/06

a little more because it sucked

I Think You Could Have Done More With This Story And Maybe We Can Become Lovers Im A Girl

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by Anonymous10/11/06

want more

i love the story and want so much more, the story ended way to soon, please write more

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more development

I think the premise was great and would have wanted a lot more to happen between them. you changed point of view midway through, which was a little confusing.

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by Anonymous07/05/11

Yumm!

I came while reading this, I am undressed and horny now,

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by Anonymous08/04/11

yay

i came from this story awsome feeling

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by Anonymous04/20/12

mmmmmmmm so wet

Ohhhhhhhhh wow.this made me cum hard

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by Anonymous08/04/13

don't stop there, please.

keep it cumming.
Chloe needs to be used.

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