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Before the Sun

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous11/22/05

making mud pies

of sunny love...was wondering where You have been hiding...smiles/blue

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by LeBroz11/22/05

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There's nothing like it,
playing in the puddles left behind
after a hot Southern gusher...

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by Bill Dada11/23/05

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...and you will write poems that are 'to drown for.'
Very nice.
ty,bd

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by f-cynyr11/23/05

nice

short and but not sweet. dark with potential rain clouds.

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by My Erotic Tale11/23/05

before the sun

nice write GP~

HAPPY TURKEY DAY~

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by lobomao11/24/05

•) awesome!!!!

delightful delights
await this day
invitations entice
can you come
out and play
in these fragile
passing spots of sun
lingering light the way
puddling pools
laugh lap and splash
touch my cheek
to wipe the rain away

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by dcpoet4411/27/05

short and sweet....

and the ending i really dig.....nicely done....don

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by tazz31707/29/12

THE PUDDLES OF RAIN WATER

splashing in and spots on the car, TK U MLJ LV NV

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