All Comments on 'Before the Sun'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
making mud pies

of sunny love...was wondering where You have been hiding...smiles/blue

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
~~

There's nothing like it,

playing in the puddles left behind

after a hot Southern gusher...

Bill DadaBill Dadaover 18 years ago
~

...and you will write poems that are 'to drown for.'

Very nice.

ty,bd

f-cynyrf-cynyrover 18 years ago
nice

short and but not sweet. dark with potential rain clouds.

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 18 years ago
before the sun

nice write GP~

HAPPY TURKEY DAY~

lobomaolobomaoover 18 years ago
•) awesome!!!!

delightful delights

await this day

invitations entice

can you come

out and play

in these fragile

passing spots of sun

lingering light the way

puddling pools

laugh lap and splash

touch my cheek

to wipe the rain away

dcpoet44dcpoet44over 18 years ago
short and sweet....

and the ending i really dig.....nicely done....don

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
THE PUDDLES OF RAIN WATER

splashing in and spots on the car, TK U MLJ LV NV

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