by Edge23
The characters are believable, as are the potential situations. Please continue!
I want to read more, however, in this story I had trouble remembering the fuckee was a man. The story made it sound like he was a girl.(the fuckee).
Should have had a little more build up of sexual tension, and Billy Ray came too fast, and so did you. I did like the story line, and it shows a lot of possibilities.
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Great story very hot and enjoyable. Thank you!
Looking forward to next part please