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One Man's Trash

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by Anonymous

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by LeBroz11/24/05

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That infamous shop
where things and
little bits of soul
are sold...

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by sack11/25/05

I can picture this shop...

a very vivid description makes this mythical shop come to life. Excellent!

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by lobomao11/26/05

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a small list
of needful things
we haggle over
and over again
discarded memories
we once thought
too precious
to ever let anyone hold
five dollar
i give you good luck price

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by dcpoet4411/26/05

weaves...

quite the tale as to the pawn shop. i enjoyed how worked the theme. i'll be sure not to visit a pawn shop anytime soon....nicely done......don

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by 11/27/05

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Oh, this was great! It reminded me of all the pawn shops in Allentown, Pa, but I never expected that ending! Well done!

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