You, undoubtedly are going to have Tina help satisfy Jessica's needs with occasional long weekend visits from Mom, right? John C. tell_redshoe
Continue on with the story, quickly.
Heh. There's not much question about what could (will) happen, here, just a matter of when and with how many. Good style, very evocative. Thanks!
Great Story please continue it.
So many possibilities it's got my interest. Ronnie W.
I got confused early on and stayed that way
would have been better if you had started with the back story then told the current story the flash back made it very confusing
Total load of Rubbish
I liked it. Waiting for it to progress
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You, undoubtedly are going to have Tina help satisfy Jessica's needs with occasional long weekend visits from Mom, right?
John C. tell_redshoe
Very nice...
Continue on with the story, quickly.
More, please
Heh. There's not much question about what could (will) happen, here, just a matter of when and with how many. Good style, very evocative. Thanks!
please Continue
Great Story please continue it.
It's a good start
So many possibilities it's got my interest. Ronnie W.
Personally while I caught the jist of the story
I got confused early on and stayed that way
confused
would have been better if you had started with the back story then told the current story the flash back made it very confusing
Total load of Rubbish
Total load of Rubbish
I liked it. Waiting for it to progress
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