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Well Damn!
that has to be one frustrated guy!
Actually kind of funny if you step back and look at it!
Nice job.
Dumb. Dumb, Dumb
That is my total comment
Better
This story is a slight departure from your normal offering. It is also better than your normal offering.
Enjoyable
A good read and a nice premise. LIked this story. Keep it up.
good
WSell written and a funny story. I enjoy it
Humorous Obsession??
Fun story. Well written as usual. Could have been in humor and satire as well, but I understand your putting in "LW". I always seem to like your writtings. JimDinMN
Great funny story
Nice funny one. Really got me laughing instead of horny. Real nice, still can't get over the ironic.
Disgusting, and Shitty!
Awful story! There is no realistic basis for any truth in this fantasy. If you need to know how to write a decent story, look up mine that are authored under Dr.T on Kristen Archives.com or Preggoman.com
This is the most stupid story I have ever read.
This guy will do anything to fuck a gangbang slut. Why, so he can share in the diseases she carries around and spreads to others? The maturity level here is about 13!
Too stupid so I gave it a 1
I'd like to think that....
when she comes back in 6 or 8 months, he tracks her down, BUT....
She is out of the gangbang business now for good, because on the last visit she came down with HIV. Seems not-so-dumb jock hubby always insisted on getting her tested after her gangbangs before marital sex would resume. Anyway, she guesses she got it on the last trip, and that fire alarm saved his life-LITERALLY!
And the only reason she is back in town is to let the other gangbangers know. Since her family disowned her and her marriage is over, she's moving out to california where she can get some progessive treatment for the aids, and some medical marijuana to help with the symptoms until the end comes.
Sometimes "bad luck" is the best luck of all, eh?
1*
You got to be kidding. Call this erotic? My ass.
Funny
FUNNY, really funny and I'm glad you have a sense of humor.
Tiny Tim
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