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great idea
i think that you have a great idea for a story although i would like to see an actually story from this. to me it all seemed incomplete.
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Interesting idea. I agree, there's a story here. A possible epic. Consider expanding? I'm intrigued. You have a terrific writing style and the ability to draw a reader deep into the story with ease. It makes me curious about why you have so few comments at this point. No worries, though, your readership will expand as word gets out about your skill. Keep writing, Lin, they will come. ;) ~Minx
Great... but still no cigar
I love the idea, the beginning, and the creepy ending- but as some seem unable to do, you've left out the most IMPORTANT details- the sex scene itself. It was vague, I could literally never feel what either character was feeling, and I couldn't stop wondering what her village looked like, the castle, and, most of all, the wolf-thing himself.
But again, I enjoyed it- but I could've liked it much more.
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