...sparring with each other, one gaining ground while the other is forced back, only to reverse positions a moment later. We break away from the kiss, both of us gasping for breath."
And left me gasping for breath, great story telling!! Your detail really brings the story to life.
That was the most erotic shower scene ever! The person who didn't like it is all alone in their thoughts. I thought it was fabulous. Keep up the good work!
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hotter than the water!
I'm not going to be able to take a shower now without flashbacks.
Excellent... next best thing to actually being there.
"Our tongues meet in a duel, ...
...sparring with each other, one gaining ground while the other is forced back, only to reverse positions a moment later. We break away from the kiss, both of us gasping for breath."
And left me gasping for breath, great story telling!! Your detail really brings the story to life.
Mmmm yummy
Loved this one hun. Want so bad to be in that story the way you wrote it. Kisses
Love this one
Want to take a shower with you for sure. Very descriptive. very erotic. Hope you continue writing.
Wow! I so relate
Wow we loved this story - it's like I wrote it myself - i so love to make love in the shower with my lover - its so hot!
omfg!!!!!
incredible ....i can picture myself there doing that with you .....very very well done!!!!
Shitty Teaser--Needs Work....A LOT OF WORK!
R U dreaming, or what? Not a story in my book, but a projection?
nice
fantastic story - i don't know what the commenter below me is on about.
Awsome!!!
That was the most erotic shower scene ever! The person who didn't like it is all alone in their thoughts. I thought it was fabulous. Keep up the good work!
GREAT STORY
Great story. It inspired me to do TEST RUN
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