All Comments on 'Heavy Breathing'

Very erotic and beautifully written.A small masterpiece.

Breaking new ground with just a married couple as props the author did a fantastic erotic job inspiring many wanna be writers who previously felt it took a gang of 18, 45 & 1/2 batteries, 6 camera's and 3 married or not married friends with big appendages or strangers from the night, partridges in pear trees, etc..

Very well done Author and appreciated - with high Regard

Watching a partner masturbate in the dark is not necessarily earth shattering, but this treatment of that act is very arousing! Thanks for sharing your talent with lit!

Beautifully written by an obviously talented author. It was so refreshing to be thoroughly stimulated by a work of erotica that didn't have the seemingly obligatory "ass-fuck!"

WFEATHER, thank you and please give us more!

Great detail - this is almost like "reading" a film

I definitely agree with the previous comments: detailed, excellent use of language, and avoids the stereotypes which degrade many stories.

be they large or small...