All Comments on 'Caught By My Brother!'

Great story, great surprise ending...

nice story, super hot scenes between the two and a great ending. good job

Emma, I love incest and you write it so excellently. I can see and hear and smell every suck and fuck and cum. You`ve done your job well. You have made my hot prick so fucking hard. It feels so good. Wonderful writing. Keep the stories cumming. John P

Emma, I very much like your writing in this piece, it really does what good erotica should do; it's hot, horny and very arousing!

the ending was priceless I didnt expect it

I loved it, emma. Well done. Woody Allen, that intelligent wit and philosopher, once said, "Incest is wonderful, and it is ok to indulge if you keep it in the family." My kind of guy.

Thank you for helping me cum.

Susan 11-14-2010

I was REALLY getting into the story until the end where she fucks her dad...for some reason that just wasnt the ending i was expecting...still good story.

This is a great piece, Emma. I like how you kind of touched in on rape and black mail, but you didn't over do it. It was a great work of imagination and feelings. You started it off interesting and you keep the action going - No pausing or boardness. The surprise at the end really knocked it out of the ball park. Great work!

This story was so hot, and the fact that her Daddy got involved at the end made it even hotter! Wish you would write more about this family. I'd love to read about both the brother and father doing her at the same time. Your storytelling is so great! Very erotic!

Very Nice, love the story line and looking forward to the next part of this story, if you continue it.

i like the concept, but i dont like how quickly it went to sex

What an ending!! Hot!!

Since all the comments are saying how great thus story is I will go in another direction. Liked it until the brother let thier dad fuck her. Sorry but wouldn't share not even with dad. Next he would be sharing his sis with his buddies or even complete strangers. Nope brother is a punk bitch and cares nothing for his sister.

Bring on the next chapter with Daddy

Brother is a dirt bag who is practically pimping out his sister. He deserves nothing less than a kick in the crown jewels.