by daniel R
could of had sister wearing silk panties to many thong stories get old
Seems to me that I've read this story 50-60 times before
Fairly good story, but you seem to have a problem with "run-on sentences". Apparently you do not have an editor. I would be more than happy to volunteer my services.
Not a bad incest story but plain vanilla efforts like this are a dime a dozen. More creativity needed on setting and scenario.
To the less intelligent critic below: I believe the words you were fumbling for were, "Wow, learn some grammar." Try to form actual sentences with punctuation and correct spelling the next time you want to comment on someone's grammar.
This was a very good read and i enjoyed it thoroughly, keep on writing. =)
Wonderful story, short but not without a story line, HOT but not to the point of being totally unbelievable. Thanks.
Wonderful story, short but not without a story line, HOT but not to the point of being totally unbelievable. Thanks.
Hmmm...... It was an ok story but it could use some more creativaty and no offence but grammer check other than that keep on writting
I BET YOUR SISTER SUCKS DICK REAL GOOD SHE CAN SUCK MY DICK ANYTIME /
so is your little sis ready for my massive black cock ?i'm ready to fill her up with evry drop of breeding seed that i have
I rarely comment on stories, but I had to say good job on this one. I think that stories here need more humor in them. Whether it's subtle or goofy, it is something authors should try their hand at at least once. thanks.
I would love to lick your hot cum from your sisters hot wet pussy. I have licked A black man's sperm from my own sister's pussy many of times. I also love to suck a hot cock after it's been in her tight ass and pussy.
This is the sexiest story ever.... I've been wanting to fuck my sister for forever.